The animation was pretty strong, the art and sound design were both really good(nearly felt like watching the original), and some of the visual puns landed pretty well. I feel like all the fundamentals of this piece were where they needed to be, however, without a stronger premise or more variety in the story telling I couldn't get too excited it. You clearly have a lot of potential and have put in a hell of a lot of work already.
Fantastic! The story boarding was spot on, action was clear and on point, the sound editing and musical score were perfect. The only thing that stuck out was that the lip sync seemed alil odd to me, but I'm a big autistic wierdo that stares at mouths. Besides the characters where so well designed and expressive that it didn't matter in the end. If the point of this piece was to garner interest and excitement for you work I think you more than met your goal.
Thanks Pizzacational appreciate the comment.
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